THUNDERSTRUCK

Loneliness brought her there in her darkest hour
Spinning out of control in a world collapsing
From within lifetime ago dreams he magically appeared
Though lost and broken she wished he had not found her

He brought her in from the frigid cold
Shattered the bonds that restrained her soul
Vowing never to lie, nor secrets would they keep
Her desperation and need making him weep

He offered himself wholly and the healing began
Extracting painful memories, mending old wounds
Breathing life over her, his own strength into her
Promising forever to love, protect and keep her

©2011 Jill Terry

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Riding the current of life's changing tides, while capturing my journey in images and words... View all posts by jill

One response to “THUNDERSTRUCK

  • eric

    Spectacular as always, although this seems to be a cut above. I’ve read it about a dozen times since you first posted it yesterday…
    Not sure if Ducky’s right, and you just spun a really excellent Faerie yarn here, but the protagonist sounds to be an extraordinarily good dood – Faerie, or Thor, or not.

    As always, keep up the exceptional work, and my hat’s off to you my friend.

    E

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