poem-a-day No.5

Illusion

She believed
From the beginning
That he
Was the one

He knew all along
She was just
One
Of many

Ⓒjillterry

Published by jill

Riding the current of life's changing tides, while capturing my journey in images and words...

4 thoughts on “poem-a-day No.5

  1. sounds really deep. Ope she stepped out of the illusion. New at this blogging thing and yours is the first article i have caught a glimpse of.would like to read more.

  2. I really like this one; if I had to sum it in one word, I would say, Evocative! I’m also participating in the Poetry Challenge, not nearly so well, but making the attempt.

  3. That’s all we can do, LisaB…make the attempt!
    Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
    Evocative; I’ll take that!

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